Prompter! Prompter! What is wrong with me?
The lines I mugged last night, aren't coming out…!
The stage is dark.. the spotlight's on me…
Those lost lines… are what the play's all about…
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I am speechless. Have no words to express. Just fantastic.
AVIC, thanks for sending a message to me. I have read the above poem. It is a very beautiful piece but I am a bit disturbed the by constant three dots after some lines. I know the implication of it, to perhaps connote a continuity of thought or situation, but I find it many times... but of course, a poet like you must have your own reason for doing so. You have the passion for writing and continue doing so. I start writing very simple and short lines, perhaps manageable to read for those who are so busy and have only few minutes before a page on computer. Take care, dear friend and keep in touch.