Friday, January 20, 2006

Sonnet Comments

Rating: 4.0

Once upon a time, you made me smile
To think that we would outlast time,
I was blinded for a while.
Who knew that my love would be such a crime?
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Alyson Savage
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Neisha Williams 23 January 2006

You have a real knack for capturing human emotion in your poetry. Have you ever thought of doing this seriously? You should. I like this poem even more than the last one-even if it is depressing. It is very well-written, and full of feeling. You can almost hear the desperation as you read this. Excellent job.

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