Wednesday, July 3, 2013

Sonnet 35: We Sleep Through The Beginning Of The Day Comments

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We sleep through the beginning of the day
Our hearts rest do sleep and love in slumber
My dearest wakes with the suns golden ray,
The day starts as a delicate number.
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David Wood
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James Mclain 04 July 2013

Paths that lead us through the windows face as the other side of sight inside the lake. Is what we see when they awake bright stars...iip

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Poetheart Morgan 03 July 2013

witty with a lovely rhythm! ! ! ! I agree, after love is so good a little nap! ! ! ! Lovely poet.

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Jenie Franksay 03 July 2013

I love the last line.... Good write.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 July 2013

day starts as a delicate number... Don't want to count days yet they keep adding. Nice sonnet.

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