Monday, July 1, 2013

Sonnet 32: Times Ancient Clock Etches Lines On Our Face Comments

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Times ancient clock etches lines on our face
We are not young anymore, fresh youth’s song
Is an old tune now as we run life’s race.
And youth’s beauty have cast deep shadows long.
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David Wood
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Pamela Sinicrope 14 September 2015

So an interesting reversal here which I think holds true.... Stay young with love. This is a lovely romantic sentiment. Since these are sonnets I think they need to be read aloud to catch the musical nuances of the form and to see how the cadence affects the meaning. I like the images of the tender bliss and the tender kiss. The last two lines set my heart on fire! Lovely....

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Lorraine Colon 03 July 2013

I like this one so much. This is the meaning of true love - physical changes not diminishing our feelings, but rather enhancing them. Well done.

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Vipins Puthooran 01 July 2013

True love does not weary with age nor fade It lives in the heart and is heaven made. ***************************** love is a pure feeling: : : : : : an excellent poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Simran Arora 01 July 2013

Nice, ...cmplt pacg of fun nd emotn...

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Vipins Puthooran 01 July 2013

True love does not weary with age nor fade It lives in the heart and is heaven made. ***************************** love is a pure feeling: : : : : : an excellent poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 01 July 2013

True love lives in the heart and is heaven made. Nice message. Beautiful sonnet.

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Aman Arora 01 July 2013

Great work. Last two lines especially.

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