Sunday, December 15, 2013

Sonnet 32 Comments

Rating: 4.5

i turned my eye toward the future
and watched as lemurians returned.
stars guided sea. the weather
grew tempest. heavenly calm burned.
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doug bentley
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Leah Ayliffe 02 July 2014

its clear beam shed through time. time was dead. eternity consumed all Lovely lines. A joy to read. Thanks!

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Mike Barrett 28 December 2013

Hi Doug, great read, great write. Loved the story and technical soundness of this poem. Cheeers!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 December 2013

Birth of Kosmic culture nicely delivered in the sonnet. Thank you.

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Marvin Brato 24 December 2013

Interesting read profound narration!

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Valsa George 18 December 2013

A travel through Time! So we have possibly entered the 13 th Grand Cycle! Let us hope that it promises a new birth! It seems that the occult (science?) fascinates you! A great write! !

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doug bentley

Richmond, British Columbia, Canada
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