Sonnet - 3: What Civilization You Do Draw Man! Comments

Good poem, call to the right path

So impressed, but humans are now blind, deaf they neither can see nor can hear they are living in deep darkness

A fabulous imageric sonnet has ever been written, it clearly shows wrongs, corruptions are being committed seriously all over the world, ....... Writings are for especially human beings but now a days probably they do not study and have no tendencies to be OK anyway, ...... so they are not resolved, on the other hand they are committing more wrongs, I see their future full of darkness

Yes, poet You rightly write Human beings today, ..........

This poem truly pictures the ugly humans' dealing and spoiling their societies, .......... hi, all the poets are only writing but being exicuted nothing as leaders are dull, unconcerned, ......... I don't see any hope / change in human societies, God knows, .....

nice writings- I won't return to your shocking darkness Which is spoiling my every bone and clone; Where is human in your earth of animal? great...10+++

The raw, rabid reality of human existence is her creatively and compelling composed. Well done! Congrats on being chosen!

Congratulations Reza for poem of the day, great sonnet

Great poem... Full of emotions and anger with the reality of out modern civilization... Thanks for sharing...

As per the conditions of darkness (corruption, violence, commiting deadly wrongs) the following touching lines come Leave me here in this hungry wilderness, In this ferocious cage leave me alone, I won't return to your shocking darkness Which is spoiling my every bone and clone; Where is human in your earth of animal? Need find out but everywhere lives devil. - - - - as sestet of this great sonnet, now it is in my list

That is why I always say; We may be colonized, but we are not civilized. Just keep writing and remind society of our failures.

Great sonnet. So well defines civilization’s curse and challenges and frustration of poets. His thoughts echo for millions. Congratulations.

IT IS GREAT SONNET IN MEANING, IMAGERY, PATTERN, WORDS CHOOSING, RHYMES, ..... AND LAST OF ALL TIME CONCERNED, a great achievement

When we started thinking to be civilized, and when a poet felt the humans are yet to be civilized, it means slowly but surely humanity is civilizing. This poem is a proof that we have a desire to be civilized. Congrats!

Congratulations! This is an excellent and amazing poem selected as the poem of the day. Deep darkness is seen is society that provokes thought. Candle light propels little darkness. For breaking deep darkness sunlight is necessary. This poem is cleverly presented...10

an enlightening poem of what greed and corruption can do to all so called civilised people? ...........well penned MR

A great and true poem shared, congrats

Dear Muzahidul, such a well expressed message... congrats for being chosen... huge 10

(cont.) ... i usually think of myself first as an animal and second as a human. is one better than the other? ? ? should we expect them to be? ? ? bri :) p.s. i say that cheat is a verb usually, unless your refer to a person as a cheat aka cheater (a noun) . the other 'topics' are nouns. i don't recognize wildlife in the poem.

ok, I'M HERE after i found the link you sent to me, but i don't know why i couldn't find it with just the title. maybe i didn't look long enough! ? ;) i have mot read the poem, but the list of 'Topics' has whet my appetite. i've read it once and may return. it could be more clear to me; maybe more reading and thinking is needed! but i 'hate' to think! ! ! clone? ? ? why use clone? (to continue) ...