Thursday, September 26, 2013

Sonnet: 3 –the Life I Live. Comments

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Sonnet: 3 –The life I live.
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The life what I like to live -
Oh’ Lord – why it eludes me,
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Amitava Sur
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Roseann Shawiak 18 April 2014

Truly provocative poem, it makes you wonder why you even search for peace, Amitava. Very good poem, I like it. Thank you for getting me to think beyond the box. RoseAnn

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Roseann Shawiak 18 April 2014

Wanting to live life the way we want to never seems to happen, it eludes us at every turn. We end up living a life we don't want, breaking our spirits and leaving us wondering why there is no peace to be found. Simple lives are just not given out freely, all the wisdom and learning we gather throughout life does not bring us any closer to finding our way to peaceful serenity. At the end of our lives we still have no answers to complete our inner desires.

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Patricia Grantham 26 September 2013

With this solemnly written poem you have the ultimate peace Amitava. Peace can only come from within then it will show itself outwards. So will love and simplicity. Regards.

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