Saturday, June 8, 2013

Sonnet 28 My Sweet Love Does Keep An Orderly House Comments

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My sweet love does keep an orderly house
Her tidy kitchen is her pride and joy
‘Tis swept clean, no dust not even a mouse
With her rolling pin, her favourite toy
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David Wood
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Valsa George 14 June 2013

A beautiful kitchen can augment the loveliness of a happy home! An orderly house and a tidy kicthen is the dream and priority of any home maker! ! Enjoyed this musing on your domestic life! !

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Clarence Prince 09 June 2013

How so true, a lovey job, David!

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Neela Nath Das 08 June 2013

A picture of happy home clean and tidy.Great!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 08 June 2013

The cup of life can be a strange brew. Nice ending to a homely poem.

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Theodora Onken 08 June 2013

David this is adorable - and no doubt true of some households - loved this!

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Paul Brookes 08 June 2013

Ah beware the wife bearing down with kitchen weapon. Made me chuckle paints a lovely scene BB: O)

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R.j. Wynn 08 June 2013

Mine just stormed out the door because I have something to do.

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Dave Walker 08 June 2013

A women's kitchen is her castle, a great poem.

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Poetheart Morgan 08 June 2013

I lover her rolling pin! ! ! I am pondering about that! ! Very funny! ! !

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Buxton Shippy 08 June 2013

An orderly house is a reflection of one's internal state; a beautifully written poem by a man who knows how to keep the peace. And to keep the peace I do take a bow.

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Buxton Shippy 08 June 2013

An orderly house is a reflection of one's internal state; a beautifully written poem by a man who knows how to keep the peace. And to keep the peace I do take a bow.

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