Thursday, May 9, 2013

Sonnet 28 Comments

Rating: 5.0

our love will be in eclipse
when lights in heaven go out
and the moon from sky drops
and lions from lambs sprout.
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doug bentley
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Wahab Abdul 19 May 2013

so sweet i like it and i love it too

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Ray Subrata Ray 18 May 2013

Well composed. I find the mingling of innocence and experience in this short verse. Liquid imagery with no graphic spot, -make the poem a class by itself. Thank you for your sharing

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Richmond, British Columbia, Canada
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