Sunday, May 5, 2013

Sonnet 27 Comments

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the tempered mastery which like a wheel,
all things centered round revolving axis,
permits the freedom to all emotions feel,
in bondage to none, is crown of life's race!
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Valsa George 07 May 2013

The ability to explore and develop, to translate harms into profit and seek experiences unlimited- your definition of freedom is all pervasive! ! The last line gives an apposite finish to this wonderful sonnet! Attempting is life's mastery! !

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Captain Cur 07 May 2013

Well done the way you likened freedom to a wheel revolving on an axis, contained in space, yet constantly exploring new terrains.

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