Friday, June 7, 2013

Sonnet 26: Love Can Make The Young Fool Blind By Its Charms Comments

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Love can make the young fool blind by its charms
When new love cannot see the surface cracks,
Where an eagerness to please sometimes harms
And two hearts may walk along separate tracks.
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David Wood
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Valsa George 08 June 2013

It is so beautiful.... to say the least! !

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 08 June 2013

Simply beautiful sonnet to say you must have true love.

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Theodora Onken 08 June 2013

Aww yes, David - the course of true love never runs smooth - for many that blind eye can only hurt - we must look at our relationships with our hearts and our minds and work hard on them always - because if it is true love - then it is worth the effort..

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Captain Cur 08 June 2013

Enjoyed this sonnet, David. At times Cupid's aim is slightly off.

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Joan Smith 08 June 2013

Absolutely true. Love really must be tendered like a garden

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Chandra Thiagarajan 08 June 2013

A brilliant Sonnet with a beautiful message, David! Enjoyed!

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Dave Walker 07 June 2013

A great poem and so true, when I first met my partner I had a six pack many years later' I still have a six pack, I just can't find it.

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Babatunde Aremu 07 June 2013

Nice write. Yes, true love is the state of the mind. Thanks for sharing

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 07 June 2013

A charming poem in adulation of love and its many facets.10.

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