Love can make the young fool blind by its charms
When new love cannot see the surface cracks,
Where an eagerness to please sometimes harms
And two hearts may walk along separate tracks.
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Simply beautiful sonnet to say you must have true love.
Aww yes, David - the course of true love never runs smooth - for many that blind eye can only hurt - we must look at our relationships with our hearts and our minds and work hard on them always - because if it is true love - then it is worth the effort..
Enjoyed this sonnet, David. At times Cupid's aim is slightly off.
A brilliant Sonnet with a beautiful message, David! Enjoyed!
A great poem and so true, when I first met my partner I had a six pack many years later' I still have a six pack, I just can't find it.
Nice write. Yes, true love is the state of the mind. Thanks for sharing
A charming poem in adulation of love and its many facets.10.
It is so beautiful.... to say the least! !