Wednesday, June 5, 2013

Sonnet 23: Who Is To Persuade Me That I Am Old? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who is to persuade me that I am old?
Is it for the mirror to condemn me?
For in my heart is still the youth so bold
Who around the bedchamber did chase thee.
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David Wood
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Valsa George 07 June 2013

And love is something we cannot remove It flows through our life like a living stream beautiful lines! Enjoyed the poem! !

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Paul Brookes 06 June 2013

Just because theirs snow on the roof doesn't mean the fires gone out A lovely comic sonnet with a laovely last line Made me chuckle 10/10 BB : O)

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R.j. Wynn 06 June 2013

You might get the golden crock pot award for this one, just kidding though powerfully written and studiously composed, a work of art.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 June 2013

Love flows through our life like a living stream Wonderful observation of a living stream. Love is life. Enjoyed this sonnet.

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