Monday, November 9, 2015

Sonnet-2-The Rain Comments

Rating: 4.0

The haze finally drifted away
Dispersed by a north easterly wind
Cool clean air now freshens the day
And things back to normal will begin
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Loke Kok yee
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Simone Inez Harriman 07 July 2017

This is a stunning nature poem Loke. The beginning of the monsoon that will soon cleanse mans pollution is penned so well.

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Loke Kok Yee 07 July 2017

Only for awhile then everything will be polluted again.

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Valsa George 10 November 2015

Beautiful poem with lovely images suggesting the transition from the cloudy haze to the torrential monsoon showers! Enjoyed much!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 10 November 2015

Verily, a warm welcome to the monsoon is well expressed.

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M Asim Nehal 10 November 2015

Great imagery and nice feeling after reading your poem.........Awesome..10++

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