The haze finally drifted away
Dispersed by a north easterly wind
Cool clean air now freshens the day
And things back to normal will begin
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Beautiful poem with lovely images suggesting the transition from the cloudy haze to the torrential monsoon showers! Enjoyed much!
Verily, a warm welcome to the monsoon is well expressed.
Great imagery and nice feeling after reading your poem.........Awesome..10++
This is a stunning nature poem Loke. The beginning of the monsoon that will soon cleanse mans pollution is penned so well.
Only for awhile then everything will be polluted again.