Sunday, July 14, 2013

Sonnet 2: Loves Sweet Labours Comments

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Two swans graced the lake with wings spreading wide
Gliding one behind the other in love
The sun glinting down the shimmering lakeside
Like a sparkling glinting turtle dove.
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David Wood
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Heather Wilkins 17 July 2013

your poem offers nice imagery. well done David. enjoyed

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 July 2013

I just saw two swans in the lake yesterday with their cygnet. I read the poem and revisited the scene. Thank you.

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Hazel Durham 15 July 2013

You capture the scene so vividly with such beauty and grace, that glides as easily as the two swans, here love is dazzling with complete happiness! !

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