Sonnet 2 Flow Of Thoughts Comments

Counscience as a railway of thoughts...the ones that are harmful and detrimental, the wordly concerns and vice must be relinquished, and replaced by thoughts that generate virtuousness, goodness and spirituality, so the human being to achieve purity and nobility.10 +++

Positive thoughts to overcome evil works. Thanks for sharing.

Marvellous speculation and depiction. The favourite lines are.......Let thoughts flow through superego, And capture the roots of morality, Let thoughts through conscience flow, To know its self and reality.....Thanks for sharing...10

A very thoughtful sonnet, wisely written. 10+++ Thoughts that are virtuous and right, Make actions and deeds noble, Our future brilliant and bright, And the vice thin and feeble.

Nice take on the id and superego, somewhere I also have written about the ego, id and superego; so pleased to find another take on the philosophy of these ideals.

Beautiful lines...... Let thoughts flow through superego, And capture the roots of morality, Let thoughts through conscience flow, To know its self and reality. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

Glory to be Allah thought is the soul of mind we must make it holy..thank you

Let thoughts flow through superego, It's simply amazing..........................10