Friday, January 8, 2016

Sonnet 2 Comments

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All I did was stare at the walls in the bedroom.
Oh! It is a feeling like the bride left her groom
On their wedding day ‘cause of an unknown reason.
She said: "I'm tired of us, " and "WHY? " is my question.
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Joshua Francis Belicano
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Ratnakar Mandlik 08 January 2016

Doubt is a foe, makes relationship turn away Yet, it's love for each other which would make us stay. Wisdom gained through a lot of experience and after lot of sufferings. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Thank you so much :) I appreciate it, I'll continue to write more poems, Sir.

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