Sonnet 2 Comments

'embraced radiance hearts were woven of mere wishes and cares' Beautiful are the smiles of a kids face. More so the joy in their souls. beautiful Sonnet 10

I thought that this was not a sonnet because I thought it has 16 lines but i just made a mistake. HAHAHAHA. anyway, this is beautiful.

''then she screamed 'O Mother dear' those two magic words shut that fear the brave children turn her merry face into the spinning garden a joyful place'' well expressed poem....10+++++

nice words :) thank u very much.

Thank you for sharing this sonnet with me.

It is filled with beautiful words especially these ones from the last stanza, 'with an imagery stays the lights that dance / unbroken challenge, an embraced radiance / hearts were woven of mere wishes and cares / the inner soul that is within dream, so impress / on the sparkling banks of this vigorous stream / a worshiper of Divine and Nature, hither came.' Lovely use of rhyme and rhythm.

a delightful thought....

the thoughts of this piece are well defined, rhymes in the early part are strong and have good rhythm in the end. Excellent, well done!

Thank you for sharing your delight!