Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Sonnet 14 Comments

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a bark with encouraging shines
a path of hawk like bumblebees
each pictures makes me glides down
gleaming arbor with its divinely gown
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Marieta Maglas 29 October 2009

interesting poem, very well written...........

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Sally Plumb Plumb 29 October 2009

'hawk like bumble bees'... strong.

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Fay Slimm 29 October 2009

'Green rifts of light in early morning grow' - - one of the visionary phrases which make your latest sonnets unique Ahmad - - thank you for sharing your talent with us - - Fay

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Ruerd Visser 29 October 2009

Wonderfull in you empathy you are, sharing your vision of heartt with us, i salute you!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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