Friday, February 3, 2006

Sonnet Comments

Rating: 4.5

Just breathe in the sweet-to-be-sucked air
Of this tangy fresh sea-breezed city
Of ours. It's a pity
You don't care,
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Tan Pratonix
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Carol Nichols 17 November 2016

To see, to feel, to cry - Live! Very nice. I like it.

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Patricia Gale 09 February 2006

You have a way with words. Nice

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Linda Ori 07 February 2006

Tan - Breathe the fragrance of existance, experience the beauty of life in all its glory! 'For this is our mortality - no matter how brief'..............Linda

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Julia Klimenova 03 February 2006

Tan, thank you for this 'carpe diem' poem.

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