Sonnet-1-The Haze Comments

A beautiful description of haze........................................

Verily, a poem full of imagery and contradictions..

Nice sonnet. Smog! True...I hadn't really thought of winter and snow as a happy alternative to haze, but I think you're right. Placing the two against each other presents an interesting conflict. Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful sonnet Loke on the haze you are clouded in. Unfortunately it is partly your own make and chiefly the Indonesian. islands......! I wonder why the forests are always set to fire! The haze is not only suffocating but can cause serious health problems like Asthma! As a citizen of Malasyia, you have expressed your anguish so powerfully! A 10

A beautiful Sonnet in flow and rhyme and gee it's too bad the weather, though perhaps the warmth is lovely to deal with...10

Nature is portrayed well with variety through contrast. Amazing.10

While you happily sleigh in the snow Here we have a shrouded sky all grey.. Very wonderful imagery is drawn here with art of expression really. Interesting and amazing.10