Thursday, January 19, 2006

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Is love something you can feel?
Or is it just something to make you ill.
These pains in my heart are unreal.
They are just enough to kill.
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Joshua Pickron
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Neisha Williams 20 January 2006

This is an excellent poem because of its effect on the reader, especially at the end. Now that we've established that you're not seriously going to find a train to jump in front of, I would like to say that although your poems are a little somber, they are very good. You have a knack for writing poetry that evokes emotion.

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