Is love something you can feel?
Or is it just something to make you ill.
These pains in my heart are unreal.
They are just enough to kill.
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This is an excellent poem because of its effect on the reader, especially at the end. Now that we've established that you're not seriously going to find a train to jump in front of, I would like to say that although your poems are a little somber, they are very good. You have a knack for writing poetry that evokes emotion.
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This is an excellent poem because of its effect on the reader, especially at the end. Now that we've established that you're not seriously going to find a train to jump in front of, I would like to say that although your poems are a little somber, they are very good. You have a knack for writing poetry that evokes emotion.