Sunday, July 30, 2006

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I can't believe you tried to lead me on
And give me a fake haven for my pain.
Looking back, I see that I was wrong
If I thought you a shelter from my rain.
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Gabriella Franco 30 August 2006

si! bien! si! ! lovely! ! i tend to lean toward these in my own writing. The ending was grand. Absolutely wonderful write! Gabriela

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Jon Lloyd 30 July 2006

The pain of lost love - a timeless subject, beautifully handled. Me gusta mucho! Jon.

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