Sunday, October 7, 2007

Songs Sound Much Sadder Comments

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Persistently, you’re chanting messages in front of me
As I lay down in my cavity lifelessly fading away.

Everyday you’d come by shedding tears for me
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Aiden Florence
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Tyease Collins 02 July 2008

I swear I melted when I first read this poem. I had to read it a couple more times. You are sooo talented that it's not even funny..wayyy better then what I could ever do. 10000/10 -Tyease

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Casey Gauthier 23 October 2007

you have so much talent. this one is great!

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Janelle Morehart 07 October 2007

Oh wow...Just..wow..this is your best yet...Im saving this one! I really really love this one. I hope when your famous you do forget about me lol. Please keep up all the great work, your so wonderfully talented please keep it up!

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