Monday, November 27, 2017

Songs Of Wives-01: Draupadi-05-The First Night With Him Comments

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And within minutes

of your being with me
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Prativa Rani 01 December 2020

nd the shores of her soul Got the first surge of pleasure Sweetening every cell of her being The core of her existence. Wow, how ecstatic.. So in some way too. Would love to read it again and again.

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Sonali Parida 02 December 2017

A great creative effort Sir. A moment's touch of passion- made all the differences and turned her teen heart ripen into a pair of lovelorn feet Thanks. Sonali.

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Sasmita Rani Nayak 29 November 2017

The first to wed and conjugate with was Yudhisthira. A great creative effort Sir. A moment's touch of passion- made all the differences and turned her teen heart ripen into a pair of lovelorn feet Thanks. 10++++ Sasmita

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Sasmita Rani Nayak 29 November 2017

The first to wed and conjugate with was Yudhisthira. A great creative effort Sir. A moment's touch of passion- made all the differences and turned her teen heart ripen into a pair of lovelorn feet Thanks.

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 29 November 2017

and turned her teen heart ripen into a pair of lovelorn feet that baby-walked on the cradle of conjugation like a woman. Beautiful poem shared. 10++

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Sonali Parida 28 November 2017

Draupadi decided to marry all the five brothers one by one, but to lead a conjugal life with each for a year subsequently. Although shocked to bear with the thought of not getting her for four years, each one agreed to this proposal. The first to wed and conjugate with was Yudhisthira. A great creative effort Sir. A moment's touch of passion- made all the differences and turned her teen heart ripen into a pair of lovelorn feet Thanks. Sonali.

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Rajendra Rout 29 November 2017

Great poem shared.. I loved it 10++++++👌👌👌👌👌

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Rini Shibu 27 November 2017

Great poem about Draupadi and pandava Brothers..

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