Tuesday, February 27, 2018

Songs Of My Heart - 04 Comments

Rating: 5.0

The song of the skylark

sounded so sweet
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Rajendra Rout 07 May 2018

when a heart has a blue wound under the shade of some sweet past while the soul was often haunted by a soul supposed to be the mate, but was separated by cruel fate. Lovely poem. I enjoy this poem

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Prativa Rani 05 March 2018

A beautiful song of the heart, the heart that has a blue wound. Nicely crafted Rani. 10+++++++

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Prativa Rani 05 March 2018

A beautiful song of the heart, the heart that has a blue wound. Nicely crafted Rani.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 02 March 2018

while the soul was often haunted by a soul supposed to be the mate, but was separated by cruel fate. A really sweet song of heart, delivering so delicate feelings. Thanks for the sharing. 10++++

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Sanjukta Sahoo 02 March 2018

while the soul was often haunted by a soul supposed to be the mate, but was separated by cruel fate. A really sweet song of heart, delivering so delicate feelings. Thanks for the sharing.

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Marieta Maglas 28 February 2018

Enjoyed reading your beautiful poem -voted 10

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Thank you for your great remarks. Thanks a lot for these sweet words of encouragement. Subhas

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 February 2018

A marvelous write! The first line of the poem drew me to go through and I found the rest of the work so enchanting. It was weaved with vivid images and beautiful lines. Very touching.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks dear Rose Marie for these nice words of encouragement.

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Rini Shibu 27 February 2018

A lovely song of heart of sweet past but with a blue wound, love is painful

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Dear Rini, thanks for these precious remarks.

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Prativa Rani 27 February 2018

while the soul was often haunted by a soul supposed to be the mate, but was separated by cruel fate. Wow, so great rhyming, such a pleasant poem. 10+++++++++++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks Rani dear for these nice words of encouragement.

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Prativa Rani 27 February 2018

while the soul was often haunted by a soul supposed to be the mate, but was separated by cruel fate. Wow, so great rhyming, such a pleasant poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks dear Rani for these nice words of encouragement.

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