Thursday, December 28, 2017

Songs Of Dishonesty:01 Comments

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A girl-friend of the past

Her heart long pledged to belong elsewhere
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Anita Aparajita Das 26 January 2018

Her heart long pledged to belong elsewhere But her world so secured. Every girl with a premarital relation often does so. She changes her priorities, to secure herself. 10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 January 2018

Thanks dear Neetu, Thanks dear friend for the great words of encouragement

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 09 January 2018

Her heart long pledged to belong elsewhere sir i am so happy I read your poem and really enjoy your poem 10+++++++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 January 2018

Thanks dear Ranjan, Thanks dear friend for the great words of encouragement

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 09 January 2018

A girl-friend of the past Her heart long pledged to belong elsewhere But her world so secured. Very heart full poem and very short poem 10+++++(+

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 January 2018

Ranjan dear, Thanks dear friend for the great words of encouragement

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Seema Sharma Rimi 29 December 2017

Yes a girl generally tries to place a stone on her heart after she is forced to marry someone she did not dream of. And there is always a sense of security for most of the girls. She has to be with the man who secures her present life. The man of the past is renamed Ex-boyfriend or Mr Annonymous.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 29 December 2017

Thanks Rimi dear for your kind and encouraging words.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 January 2018

Rimi dear, Thanks dear friend for the great words of encouragement.

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