scarlet in wine beckons blue within
embracing pearls of sweetened cadence
green soaked in rain bestirs of grin without
on bay of eternity be the mine mingling in me
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Beautiful words in beautiful order. Dr. your works are attractive.
Fantastic work nice rich idea with good expression.. enjoyed reading it..10/10
This is fabulous. You have created an amazing effect through the use of imagery. There is also so much music flowing along with the beautiful lyrics. After reading it, I looked out of my window to see the Casuarina trees swaying gently in the morning breeze. Thanks for sharing and hope to read much more picture-perfect poetry.
From : ****TaMaRa HaNaRinG.****** BaCk To LiFe..FreeDoM FlOTilla (PaLeStiNe- JeRuSaLeM United Arab Emirates; Female; 41) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 6/4/2010 7: 19: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : song hi dear..a very beautiful and a wonderful poem..still facing problem in commenting..regards engrossing upon to weave pages onshore cry seems to serenades on lap of innicence dew when redeems by golden beams of dawn entirety redounds to joy by immortal song enticing upon mirth of ocean`s surge i look to sky to see sating whites of moon luminous glow overpowers me being attired in glass i do remember songs of casurina in autumn.
a lovely write with rich idea and what I found good here is the composition of words and linkages of verses, which make the poem quite impressive and hert touching one.. loved it dear friend..
a lovely write with rich idea and what I found good here is the composition of words and linkages of verses, which make the poem quite impressive and hert touching one.. loved it dear friend..
a lovely write with rich idea and what I found good here is the composition of words and linkages of verses, which make the poem quite impressive and hert touching one.. loved it dear friend..
a lovely write with rich idea and what I found good here is the composition of words and linkages of verses, which make the poem quite impressive and hert touching one.. loved it dear friend..
a lovely write with rich idea and what I found good here is the composition of words and linkages of verses, which make the poem quite impressive and hert touching one.. loved it dear friend..
i look to sky to see sating whites of moon luminous glow overpowers me being attired in glass ................................................................ it's wonderful, Subhendu..10 Best wishes, Tsira