Song To My Beloved Comments

A stunning song..fabulous tribute! ! !

Beautifully done, words beautifully sprung from a greatly passionate writer, Brava fair lady.

Hello Ariel, As you know this is a beautiful write and I just love it.. God Bless My Friend In Poetry..(smile) Carolyn

A lovely poem with extraordinary manifestation of sentiments! A great write!

I enjoy this very much. Thanks for sharing

Romantic tribute to love one! Top marks

You gave so much life to it, 'Sweet as Marmalade'~ mmmm I'll have sweet dreams, you've made me taste it, haven't had a piece or marmalade in years.

Thank you for those beautiful words. You are a true poetess! A ten!

I can relate to the appreciation of My poem Memories! ! : -))) I liked your poem very much. thanks Joanna

Thank you Ariel! ! ..very romantic but soulfully sad...you got a 10 from me! ! ...sandra

A lyrical poem with a Shakespearian feel. Love your 'marmalade' lips and the melancholy of the last lines: 'then beneath the tedious moon flux of tears create a pale lagoon.' Beautiful heartfelt poem. love, Allie xxxx

Beautiful...romantic and sad at the same time.