Monday, May 28, 2012

Song: The Last Wave Comments

Rating: 5.0

I heard the wind a-blowin'.
The wind, it raged for you.
I gave you ample warnin'.
I thought that you'd come through.
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Dave SmithWhite
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Dr Antony Theodore 06 March 2018

I heard the wind a-blowin'. The wind, it raged for you My fear and guilt was growin', So little could I do. has sunk me deep in blue....... sadness and lot of images....... thank you dear poet.... tony

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Tia Attwood 14 February 2016

Wow this is brilliant, LOVED IT. Regards Tia

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Unwritten Soul 01 June 2012

I love this part: I heard the wind a-blowin'. The wind, it raged for you My fear and guilt was growin', So little could I do it done with all heart and it really nice to finish the write...i am love it_Unwritten Soul

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David SmithWhite 28 May 2012

Thanks Seagull, A slight piece I know, and I'm never sure when any of it comes from, or what it really means, but sometimes I get mesmerized by the flow... i'm sorry, i'm raving, but thanks for the comment! Cheers, David.

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Neela Nath Das 28 May 2012

The tune of sadness, the gallery of imagery have added beauty to it.Nice!

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