Monday, January 29, 2007

Song Of Your Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your eyes are ivory keys
With blackest pupils in between
And they play the sweetest music
My eyes have ever seen
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Abby Koning
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Delilah Miller 29 January 2007

That might've been the most amazing thing I've read lately. I don't even have words for that. You are the next Pablo Neruda, and he's the song of my eyes. This was a spectacular job. PLEASE keep writing. Xs and Os, Colette

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