Tuesday, August 30, 2016

Song Of The Naiad Comments

Rating: 3.5

Cool pool under the tall waterfall.
Seen through the sheer lattice
Of resounding water.
Which I part to suffer the pleasure
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Tom Billsborough
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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2016

Swimming gives nice feeling. I have lots of memories of my teenage of swimming. Really you have expressed very nicely. Resounding of water under pool of waterfall gives immense pleasure. Spirit remains free from external dilemmas at this time. Breath of silence matters a lot for happiness. EXCELLENT Poem this is....10

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Tom Billsborough 02 September 2016

Yes, i love swimming. I'm naturally buoyant in water tho I'm quite slim. Find it hard to swim under water though.

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Annette Aitken 30 August 2016

loving the tale your are sharing here, the visuals unfolding whilst reading it is glorious...

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Tom Billsborough 30 August 2016

The pool referred to is at Ingleton Falls in North Yorkshire. There's a steady gentle climb from the car park at Ingleton Village (famous as a centre for caving) . The pool beneath the Falls is fairly wide and deep enough for swimming. If you're ever in North Yorks let me know. It is worth a visit and I'll send you directions.

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Tom Billsborough

Tom Billsborough

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