Sunday, August 9, 2009

Song Of The Lost Mermaid Comments

Rating: 4.6

All alone below the thundering sky,
I saw the heaven- dark and furious:
madened by the rage of destruction
It was vain to cry for help-
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Sohini Pal
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can i use this for my mermaid photography recently done. google me by my name on instagram

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 October 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Sohini. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Anand Madhukar 16 September 2009

Beautiful. I cant believe that you are just 13 odd years old. At this rate, you will surely win the Nobel for literature by the time you are a few years older.

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WoW great poet...so excellent writing..deserve more than 10 +++++++++++++

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Shirley Woods 09 August 2009

It is very lovely and thanks for that. My favourites do always tell a story although I find that hard to do myself. Good work and keep at it.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 09 August 2009

lovely...the imagery is superb...you have fantastic maturity in your writing and thought...good wishes...10

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Sumanta Dasgupta 09 August 2009

Excelent Wish U every sucess in your life God bless U

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Sohini Pal

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