Thursday, May 9, 2019

Song Of The Immigrant Comments

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The sharp keel harrows
The sea's fallow.
Astern the seagulls hover
The shock-white memories
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Tom Billsborough
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 May 2019

/cont... It's always great to read what you have to say, I like reading u whenever I come here. Kudos for this one! Plz pls do comment my newest poem too, titled, Llama drama, u might enjoy it.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 May 2019

Wow you have very awesomely captured and pictured the sailing immigrants that come sailing from faraway places to settle in various countries, they are like settlers of the past, like peaceful intruders who want a change in life and setting so much they brave the oceans ah. In very impressive fabulous style you have worded and described them. Plz pls do comment my newest poem too, titled, Llama drama, u might enjoy it.

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tom billsborough 10 May 2019

Thank you for your comments. We should be kinder to Immigrants. They have enriched our culture in the past and will continue to do so. I shall read your LLama poem now.

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wes vogler 09 May 2019

well said Tom I was on the ship and felt the emotions

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tom billsborough 09 May 2019

I was thinking of genuine refugees. We makes a big fuss about " illegal" immigrants over here. I'm half descended from one of them.. A Viking who came across from Dublin! And my cat is even more so.. either Phoenician or Egyptian. I'll check with her when I've studied those lingos! Love the Bud the Artist cartoon today! Very funny!

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