Saturday, March 4, 2006

Song Of The City Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sirens howl in the street & the cafe,
Trying to pull you either way,
Like carnival barkers
Peddling heart ache & tragedy
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Will Barber 02 May 2006

This is an elegant poem - I'd have given it a 10, but you spelled 'its' with an apostrophe! Your imagery is striking and free of cliche. Wonderful stuff, absolutely.

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