Wednesday, June 10, 2015

Song Of The Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our love was bright as morninig sun shine
It was immaculate and unbreakable
Bravado people where umpteen
It was in your arms, your chest where my head land
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ishmael iron mkali
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Dr Antony Theodore 01 May 2018

It was in your arms, your chest where my head land And now we are apart apart forever......now i am lonely since my heart is in you. love, loss, pain, suffeirngs, tears. life........ so powerfully portrayed poem dear poet. thanku dear poet. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 June 2017

Write comment. A sad start indeed. Thanks

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Patricia Grantham 14 November 2016

A very nice and romantic.

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Allotey Abossey 11 June 2015

One thing I've learned to do is not to force those things that should not be. And at other times, let love be..... For it will journey towards where it should. God bless you for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 10 June 2015

Many feel this way. Thanks for sharing, Ishmael Peace

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Ishmael Iron Mkali 10 June 2015

my home is in your heart

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