Saturday, December 16, 2017

Song Of The Blue Lagoon: - 01: A Honeymoon Comments

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Take me there alone

Oh dear
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 17 December 2017

Within embraces bared Nobody hears us With heartbeats shared sir beautiful lyrical quality wish you10 10++++++

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Rajendra Rout 05 May 2018

Ranjan I agree with you lovely poem

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Ravi Kopra 16 December 2017

Take me to a place where I could kiss you again and again under the full moon in the cool spring breeze coming from gardens of fragrant flowers...

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 16 December 2017

Thank you Ravi for your eternal awareness and concern for poets like us, your reading and remarks in poetic form ever inspires.

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Ravi Kopra 16 December 2017

Subash, I am one day going to steal your take me to a place' phrase and write a longer poem including the stanza I already posted here. Happy poetry writings!

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