Song Of Spring 3 Comments

your cuckoo is singing even now in m heart and in my brain. this is such a fine poem. come and remain with me to soothe my heart and sing me a lovely song. do not fly away. be with me. remain with me. very nice poem. thank you dear poet

A lovely poem. I like the way you use imagery in this poem. I can see where you are as a poet. I like the rhyming lines at the end of each line and get the emotion of loving spring and how it brings hope to all of us about life getting into a new phase of growth. You merge the metaphor of the continuity of time well through the observations of the wind as a fiery band.

A lovely song of spring so beautifully rendered. Tiku ji, you have brought out the beauty and warmth of spring in this poem. All the four verses are superb! O Spring, My Spring Please don't hurry away This time a little longer you must stay Perching on the rooftop the cuckoo will sing The finest of song of love playing music with its wings i loved this spring poem. A full vote of 10