Sunday, June 21, 2015

Song Of Nature Comments

Rating: 5.0

Come on, awake - the morning rays are peeping at you
They peep through the window pane
With a message to begin a new day again.
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Amitava Sur
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Shahin Latif 23 November 2015

Your imagery is really pleasure to me. Excellent penned. Thank you so much.

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Roseann Shawiak 23 July 2015

Revisited this poem, it is so peaceful, soothing my spirit through the divine. Thank you, Amitava. RoseAnn

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 27 June 2015

Lovely flow of words.Truly the morning time is a golden time in all aspects

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Roseann Shawiak 21 June 2015

Beautiful imagery flowing right along with the rhythm of your poem. Delicate and fragile like a flower bud not yet opening, just peeping timidly at the new day, bright with promise and joy. An excellent poem, Amitava, a soothing poem of nature that brings peace to all who read it. Thank you, for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Amitava Sur

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