Song Of Myself Comments

" In Whitman’s Song of Myself (which appears to be where most modern readers encounter this spelling) , the phrase “I loafe and invite my soul…” means that the poet is relaxing and allowing himself time for spiritual (and physical) regeneration." I THINK you borrowed a tiny bit from Walt W's much longer poem. This poem does not work for me, but will for some i suppose. bri ;)

A lovely display of fine poetic skills ceremoniously rich in tone. A poignant piece of poetry written in verse with literary conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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With a loafe heart I beckon my soul/I tipped and leaned to view a spike of summer grass...I profusely admire poetic beauty of the expression! A beautiful poem....10

Full moon trill, Sing again