Song Of My Love* Comments

Most most beautiful poem.... So great.....10++++++

look at the night sky, i see ur writing shiny just like a star...u filter the lame word and collect the best words to complete your beautiful star...This inspiring me...! Thanks for sharing

Beautiful words filled with emotions, I love it! Very well written and wonderful to read. The imagery is amazing! Lovely, just as all your poems are,10++++ Keep writing, your words could change the world one day

this my fav, u should use this as it is really good. can u read some of mine plz thnx

narrated like singing though you just wrote the poem and posted it here... nice write!

Like wings of memory....a powerful swing of wind that brings up to the star.....so deep and glorious indeed to the heart and soul.....God bless a star and 10 +++++

WONDERFUL POEM ON LOVE! It includes pain, ecstasy and longing for the divine love This love is timeless, written in the stars..beyond time - transcending life and death... sung from the highest citadel as the poet prays there beneath God's feet..enjoys Sharpest pain and sweetest pleasure..... being countless ages together...10+++++ A great insight in this prayer. May you keep writing so beautifully. Thanks for inviting. .

Ishould write you love letters to stir the heart of a woman to make the fair maiden weep. THATS WHAT I CALLED A GOOD LOVE POEM, THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL AND INSPIRING, ALL I CAN SAY IS THAT YOU ARE A REALLY POEM, KEEP UP THE GOOD JOB

Well-explained love with its eternal flame which never extinguishes. You have ties three spaces with a single thread that is love. Plain, air and sky. Woman, wind and star. Anyway, your saying is absolutely pronounced. And yet in the last line you finish with 'It was written in the stars'. Yes, it was, it is and it will be if human race still exist on the earth. Thank You. Write more...... Regards, 10+ pranab

Before the Alfa and Omega the beginning or the end. Our love, was written in the stars beyond time - transcending life and death. Brighter than the shapes of night supernovae pale beside that light It was written in the stars. very nice poem indeed! ! ! i do not believe in predestination. but i do really believe our love experiences is guided by God. all the joys and sufferings of love makes u so mature and help us relate to God more and more. thank you for sharing.

A very sweet song, indeed! Though the theme is run-off-the-mill in poetry, you have presented it very well. The imagery is fabulous, words are passionate, mood is positive, flow of the stanzas is smooth, literary quality has not been sacrificed for the sake of rhyme, theme, of course, is good. Overall, a very good write. A 10+++++....... for sure here.

I like when u use stars as a subject! it make this more romantic hahahaha... well it is nice and well written by u like always! ...Pure is a correct word to describe it.. i just got an idea to write a song after read it..lol well i think no need to compare with ur poem of ' a family blessing' because both are good in it's on way....Thanks for sharing this sweet lullaby

Revelations 21: 6 And he said unto me, It is done. I am Alpha and Omega, the beginning and the end. I will give unto him that is athirst of the fountain of the water of life freely I'm really tuning and channeling into this write.

Like Ruthie I say Wow! What a beautiful love poem that is intense & expresses deep emotion. Great write. I give it a 10. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Spiritsong

Wow! Such deep emotion and intensity! Bravo Ruthie: o)

simply one of the greatest love poems ever written. so very very beautiful.