Friday, September 1, 2017

Song Of Eventide Comments

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SONG OF EVENTIDE

On a busy Lagos' day
His mind sprouted a new sourness and melted
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Akinmuleya Alfred
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Sandra Erickson 04 September 2017

Hello. I love how this poem winds its long, loud commute right down to the last two lines and creates the perfect juxtaposition. You can almost hear the door closing out the world, and that split second of silence before the song begins.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 September 2017

Life faces troubles and obstacles come and go. An amazingly drafted poem is shared here.10

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it's very nice of you sir. thanks

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