Saturday, April 2, 2022

Song Of Bravery ~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Go away, Go away, worry,
And I am busy and I have no hurry;
Sail away, sail away, fear;
I am no coward I shall play to tear.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Nabakishore Dash 05 April 2022

Thanks for your strong determination which can not br lured by any thing. Beautifully written.

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An energising marching song. Great… I can hear the tap of the boots….

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Richard Wlodarski 03 April 2022

Outstanding!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 April 2022

A song of bravery so well written......beautiful poem dear Asim ji.......10

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Juhaina Tumlu 03 April 2022

Wow so well written for motivation.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 April 2022

'My courage is my shield, no one can steal'. A magnificent line from a great poem. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 April 2022

A beautiful song of bravery. Wonderful poetic expressions with great flow of words.

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Susan Williams 02 April 2022

now that was a wonderful tour of your heart and mind --planted in the present but tinged with thoughts of the future and past---a well-written and thought filled piece---5 stars

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 April 2022

My poor soul, has taken enough toll: Leave me alone to muster my thoughts, Leave me to, think and write....beautiful idea. He is the winner who has determination and courage. A brilliant poem...appreciated the poet's stance!

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