Monday, October 24, 2016

Song Of A Maiden Comments

Rating: 5.0

My mother is not at home
Push me not to the corner,
Take not my golden flower
Its for my husband to behold.
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John Chizoba Vincent
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Marieta Maglas 24 October 2016

My mother is not at home Push me not to the corner, Take not my golden flower Its for my husband to behold.- wonderful use of negation in poetry -voted 10

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 24 October 2016

It sounds more of abuse, that is what I smell about this poem. An abuse, sexually. Thanks for sharing it.

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John Chizoba Vincent

John Chizoba Vincent

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