Song Of A Dying Infant Comments

this is your best, i can see every word, , , , , , , , , , ,

Your beautiful imagery, particularly the butterflies, softened the grief of the infant dying. To go in peace also gives the poem a gentle feel. The parents left behind are the ones who will be sorrowfully grieving. 10 love Karin

Yeah even the grown up man can sing this song because he is going from earthly mother to a lap of the divine mother......yeah no need to cry........rejoice oh soul........her lap is a lap of bliss...............A Good Write, , , , , ,

Well written short poem with a touch of sadness........

A very poignant piece Sally..

' tiny golden birds ' that hits a high note.