Saturday, January 30, 2010

Song For Tears Comments

Rating: 3.2

Sitting here with loneliness
Out-casting my own consciousness
With the radio playing our song
Sounds of tear playing all along
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Sheldon Allen Saluta
COMMENTS
Kranthi Pothineni 01 May 2010

A moving write. Encouraging write too. Good one.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 April 2010

nice poem.... nice simile in 'walking like a voodoo doll'

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Chidiebere Franklin 26 April 2010

gush this is alovely poem.i can really relate to it.this poem surely made me cry.kudos and pls more of it.

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Whisperkwane Lamb 25 April 2010

the tracks of your tear and fear are day to day...way to way...come what not...may...yo said a mouth full but young has nothing to with the heart...in most cases...I agree...stand tall...say...be it...feel it...

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 25 April 2010

Ever verse in song for tears tugged my heart string...

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Pradyumna Jyotir 25 April 2010

very very touching....thanks

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May Witwit 25 April 2010

I like it. Very touching. Thanks

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Emerald Eyes 02 March 2010

I really love this poem xx I really love music and just knowing how it makes sense feels pretty awesome lol.. I would never know how to write something like this.. ... This is my favourite 10++

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