Saturday, December 31, 2016

Song: Conspiracy Theory Comments

Rating: 5.0

We will all go out in sunshine,
And will come back in the dark;
With the secret state provocateurs,
The agent and the narc.
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Terry Craddock 31 December 2016

We will all go out in sunshine, And will come back in the dark; With the secret state provocateurs, The agent and the narc.' a wonderful stanza, this is the second conspiracy theory poem I have commented on today, so many of us are tired of the government cover ups and refusal 'To accept any blame or the cost.' The root cause is money protects money, power maintains the status quo at any cost, this is 'The way the world works for the haves and have-nots.' People are tired of a status quo which excludes the powerless, at least the poor with nothing to loss are, this is the reason a secretary of state campaigned only in California and large cities, ignoring rural America, common people, common views; this is the reason she lost almost every state and won cities but not rural communities, despite no security on her personal laptop she was not hacked, she was trumped; common people got tired of being lied to, excluded and treated like idiots, nothing to do with Russia, this was a wave goodbye of massive rejection from within. A poem which needed to be written, waiting for many more equally well written.10+++

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Pamela Sinicrope 31 December 2016

Well done. I like the rhythm, flow, and verse in your song. I think many of us are weary...and hopeful.

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