Thursday, August 29, 2013

Song Children At Play Comments

Rating: 5.0

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A little boy met a little girl
called her out to play
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Heather Burns
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Shahzia Batool 31 August 2013

melodious...all lines and esp the chorus! ! !

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Valsa George 31 August 2013

Is it a re submission? I feel I have read it before and commented on it! Any way a beautiful poem! !

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 31 August 2013

a sweet song of love lost for good yet forever remembered!

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Brian Skyers 30 August 2013

A very sweet story, the way we hope it to be..nice.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 30 August 2013

Nature sung the song with nature lovely HB i love this poem nice work

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2013

Beautiful poem...Lovely fairytales..Beautiful way you have portrayed...Loved reading it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 August 2013

Nice enactment. Keep playing again, again, and again. Delightful poem. Thank you.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 30 August 2013

A sweet poem to read. D stuff of fairytales in neverland where children neva grow up so they need to place a ring in childhood. To me dis reminds of hindu child mariages. Take care n tnx 4 a fine fab flowing poem.

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Lyn Paul 30 August 2013

A real fairytale..... I am with Thomas

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Neela Nath Das 29 August 2013

Unique! A song of experience in a packet of experience.

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