Wednesday, June 13, 2012

Song: Blow-Back! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Take me back! Take me back!
When the will to kill I lack.
My nerves so shot to pieces,
I might lash out and attack.
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Chinedu Dike 20 February 2015

A well written poem depicting the essence and the ups and downs of soldiering. A brilliant piece written with insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.

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