Bring fire-flies to the wedding feast
Cast your spell on the rough-coat beast
In the quiet where the crickets sing
One word changes everything.
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Very nice reflections on life, and filled with visuals which I love. Very good poem.10. S.
I LIKE IT AND THANK YOU CAUSE YOU SHARED WITH US WHAT YOU FEEL IN DEED YOU SEEM TO ME THE YOU ARE A TRUE POET IT'S POWERFUL POEM KEEP WRITING
Many things ought to be taken into consideration when someone stands before your poetry, but the most important thing is the system your words behind.. words in system as soldiers in discipline..as if you were in someway, somehow somekind of a man in command..joking//\\..outstanding..indeed PHDAHMEDKHALED....YOURFRIENDFOREVER...YOUARETRUEPOET
I do love the poem, especially the last two lines; there's a lot of depth and mystery happening here. Great writing.