For his afternoon and evening workout,
Our son is getting ready to go gym,
Walking for fifteen minutes so far,
He will twist and twist and jump,
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The last stanza makes a perfect completion of the poem, as the completion of a day perfectly lived, with an healthy routine: both for the body, and mind.
A marvelous poem that captures a healthy, productive and.spiritual lifestyle. Lovingly penned for a son. A great piece.
A nice piece of work. A good attempt in the chapter of wisdom. Thank you very much, Mahakul for sharing it.
The son's readiness to visit spiritual Zym to gain the. muscles (used as a metaphor) is definitely embracing! He should gain wisdom through rigorous workouts and practices! A deeply inspirational piece of work to all sons!
I liked this poem a lot Kumarmani ji. The way you have described his routine and his life style is very endearing. Really happy to know that apart from exercises of walking and going to the Gym he has time to do meditation and sing in praise of God. That is wonderful. A full score for this lovely poem - - - 10
Spiritual muscles need the greatest strength. Many of our greatest battles are spiritual. We go to the gym for our physical training, but it is God who trains our spiritual muscles to grow. Between workouts, we need time to meditate, rest, and let God impart wisdom. So much truth in this poem for life. Thank you kind, poet and friend.
Having spiritual exercise to develop mind, ........... yes, proper way we need it, thanks for sharing the poem with us,10